உயிர் சுவாசம் நீயே _ கருத்துதிரி

[Shamugasree]

Athithi vantha ella problem solve agidum.
Ana junior artist plan nadantha deva innum kova paduvale...
Adhi ah innum veruka masala
Adhi vendam nu sonna reason ah deva avlo seekaram accept panni convince agiduvala.
Eriyura ava kovathula innum ennaya oothama iruntha sari
Deva love panratha pavi kita sonna tha ketiye pakki appove ne sollirukalame problem sernthu face pannirukalam.
Deva sollanum nu wait pannathu evlo thappa pochu
Devadhith

 

[Priya albatross]

Athithi vantha ella problem solve agidum.
Ana junior artist plan nadantha deva innum kova paduvale...
Adhi ah innum veruka masala
Adhi vendam nu sonna reason ah deva avlo seekaram accept panni convince agiduvala.
Eriyura ava kovathula innum ennaya oothama iruntha sari
Deva love panratha pavi kita sonna tha ketiye pakki appove ne sollirukalame problem sernthu face pannirukalam.
Deva sollanum nu wait pannathu evlo thappa pochu
Devadhith

Unga idea andha adhiku illama pochu sis... Na avanuku solra????... Thanks fr ur lovely comment sis

 

[Shamugasree]

Plan la nalla tha potanuga... Ana ippo deva nilamai ?

 

[Mathykarthy]

Nice update.. serthu vaikirenu solli mothama pirichu vittutu vanga polarukku.. idhanala devakku adhi mela iruntha kobamum., valiyum than adhigam ayirukku

 

[Priya albatross]

Plan la nalla tha potanuga... Ana ippo deva nilamai ?

Innaiku epi'l

 

[Priya albatross]

Nice update.. serthu vaikirenu solli mothama pirichu vittutu vanga polarukku.. idhanala devakku adhi mela iruntha kobamum., valiyum than adhigam ayirukku

Correct sis

 

[Shamugasree]

Dei Adhi kalyanam pannitiya deva va ???
Deva nalaiku enna panna pora
Adhi solra karanangal accept senju avana yethupala

 

[Mathykarthy]

Nice update ? pavi super ? thangachikitta friend kagavum friendkitta thangachikagavum pesurathu arumai.. vinith kooda kalyanam nadakka irunthathaa.? Aadhi en avlo thooram poga vittan.. deva konjam irangi vaamaa..

 

[Shamugasree]

Deva emotional agita avasarama mudivu eduthu sothapura. Adhi ku appo iruntha etho shock and situations handle panna theriyathanala apdi sollirukan. Ana ippovum deva prachanaiya sari panna parkama ava ego ku theeni potu thappa decision edukura.
Athithi vara tym Ivan enna shoot la poi irukan.
Swamy vaya thorapara
Deva pavi pesinathula thelivala

 

[Priya albatross]

Dei Adhi kalyanam pannitiya deva va ???
Deva nalaiku enna panna pora
Adhi solra karanangal accept senju avana yethupala

தெரியலையே....

 

[Priya albatross]

AVa

Nice update ? pavi super ? thangachikitta friend kagavum friendkitta thangachikagavum pesurathu arumai.. vinith kooda kalyanam nadakka irunthathaa.? Aadhi en avlo thooram poga vittan.. deva konjam irangi vaamaa..

Ava irangi vandhuta story mudinjidum sis

 

[Priya albatross]

Deva emotional agita avasarama mudivu eduthu sothapura. Adhi ku appo iruntha etho shock and situations handle panna theriyathanala apdi sollirukan. Ana ippovum deva prachanaiya sari panna parkama ava ego ku theeni potu thappa decision edukura.
Athithi vara tym Ivan enna shoot la poi irukan.
Swamy vaya thorapara
Deva pavi pesinathula thelivala

Hmkum... Thelinjitalum

 

[Shamugasree]

Swamy enna ketaru???
Adhi no sonna avar solra paiyan udane kalyanam pannanum solvara. Illa Adhi maranthutu abroad poidanum solvara.

 

[Priya albatross]

Swamy enna ketaru???
Adhi no sonna avar solra paiyan udane kalyanam pannanum solvara. Illa Adhi maranthutu abroad poidanum solvara.

Yepdi sis ipdi... nenga sonna rendula tha onnu

 

[Shamugasree]

Ava foreign la irunthu vara. So abroad anupi ava manasa matha try panraro. Pirinju iruntha rendu perum move on agiduvanga ninaichutar
Iva kilamburathukulla epi thali kattinsn namma hero

 

[Mathykarthy]

Good going sis... adhithi no sonna thaan solra paiyana kattikanum nu solli iruparu.. indha pakkam adhi tta pesi no solla vachirukkaru...

 

[Priya albatross]

Ava foreign la irunthu vara. So abroad anupi ava manasa matha try panraro. Pirinju iruntha rendu perum move on agiduvanga ninaichutar
Iva kilamburathukulla epi thali kattinsn namma hero

Adhi kitta nenga kettinganu solra sis

 

[Priya albatross]

Good going sis... adhithi no sonna thaan solra paiyana kattikanum nu solli iruparu.. indha pakkam adhi tta pesi no solla vachirukkaru...

Apdiya andha swamy pannaru... Avara kavanichikra irunga

 

[Mathykarthy]

Nice update ellarum adhi deva love a accept panni avanga love solra moment kaga aasaiyoda kathirukanga.. indha loosu swami thevaiyillama kulambi payanthu ellar santhosathayum keduthuttaru..?? appadi enna than adhi ammakku fb..?

 

[Priya albatross]

Nice update ellarum adhi deva love a accept panni avanga love solra moment kaga aasaiyoda kathirukanga.. indha loosu swami thevaiyillama kulambi payanthu ellar santhosathayum keduthuttaru..?? appadi enna than adhi ammakku fb..?

Nxt ud

 

[Shamugasree]

Swamy ninaichatha nadathitaru
Adhi no sonna avar parkura paiyan thana kalyanam panna sonnar.
Ithula epdi Adhi avala kalyanam pannan

 

[Priya albatross]

Swamy ninaichatha nadathitaru
Adhi no sonna avar parkura paiyan thana kalyanam panna sonnar.
Ithula epdi Adhi avala kalyanam pannan

Therinjudum sis... Story mudiya poguthu

 

[Shamugasree]

All secrets revealing.one by one.
Ravi and gayu pirinjutanga. Athu pola deva ku aga koodathu nu ninaikurar swamy... nalla appa thaan. Ana love nu varapo swamy pannatha ethuka kashtama tha iruku
Adhi eppo epdi gayu and thangai ah meet pannan.
1 mystery to be revealed... epdi kalyanam pannan.

 

[Priya albatross]

All secrets revealing.one by one.
Ravi and gayu pirinjutanga. Athu pola deva ku aga koodathu nu ninaikurar swamy... nalla appa thaan. Ana love nu varapo swamy pannatha ethuka kashtama tha iruku
Adhi eppo epdi gayu and thangai ah meet pannan.
1 mystery to be revealed... epdi kalyanam pannan.

Nxt epi la therinjidum sis

 

[Shamugasree]

Nxt epi la therinjidum sis

Adutha week story mudinjuduma dear.
Competition ku 2nd story ethum vara vaipu ullatha

 

[Priya albatross]

Adutha week story mudinjuduma dear.
Competition ku 2nd story ethum vara vaipu ullatha

Mudinjidum sis.. innum 2 epila mudikra plan... Word limit. Registration closed sis. So nxt story chance illa. Bt yezhutha thought vandha yethukum prasha sis kitta kettu pakanum.

 

[Shamugasree]

Mudinjidum sis.. innum 2 epila mudikra plan... Word limit. Registration closed sis. So nxt story chance illa. Bt yezhutha thought vandha yethukum prasha sis kitta kettu pakanum.

Ok dear. All the best.

 

[Mathykarthy]

Super update ? swamyum pavam than.. love panni veeta ethirthu kalyanam panniyum purithal illama pirintha avar kan munnadi parthirukkar.. enga atha pola avar ponnu life um ayitumonu payapaduraru.. oruthar life mathiri innoruthar life irukkathu than.. aana oru appavaa avar payam niyayam thane.. ithula yarume villian kedayathu.. intha writer than..

 

[Priya albatross]

Super update ? swamyum pavam than.. love panni veeta ethirthu kalyanam panniyum purithal illama pirintha avar kan munnadi parthirukkar.. enga atha pola avar ponnu life um ayitumonu payapaduraru.. oruthar life mathiri innoruthar life irukkathu than.. aana oru appavaa avar payam niyayam thane.. ithula yarume villian kedayathu.. intha writer than..

Enna sis posukunu enna villain sollitinga... Yellame avanga vidhi ???

 

[Mathykarthy]

Wow ???? emotional & lovely epis.. Adhi semma mass ??? evlo velai parthurukkan naan kooda avan love kaga edhuvume pannalanu nenachurukken.. aana vinith oda nadakka iruntha kalyanatha niruthi avalukku time koduthu., take care panninu evlo velai parthurukkan.. adhi so sweet.. last rendu perum serra idam so cute.. adhi deva missing so much ? pavi, vinith, shre super friends.. adhithi lovable sister.. devaraj gayathri love super.. happy to read ? congrats sis ?

 

[Priya albatross]

Wow ???? emotional & lovely epis.. Adhi semma mass ??? evlo velai parthurukkan naan kooda avan love kaga edhuvume pannalanu nenachurukken.. aana vinith oda nadakka iruntha kalyanatha niruthi avalukku time koduthu., take care panninu evlo velai parthurukkan.. adhi so sweet.. last rendu perum serra idam so cute.. adhi deva missing so much ? pavi, vinith, shre super friends.. adhithi lovable sister.. devaraj gayathri love super.. happy to read ? congrats sis ?

Thank you so much sis... Starting to end ungaloda comment... It was an energy booster ????????

 

[Shamugasree]

@NNK 12
Adhi Sema mass. Silent ah irunthu evlo senjurukan.
Amma thangai ah thedi sernthu...
Deva va ava pokula vidura pola vittu Ivan plan apdiye ellam seiya vechutan.
Beautiful friendship between 2 generations
Deva egoistic ah Adhi ah mannikama iruntha Ana finally avana thedi vara vechutan
Very nice
Daily UD Thadai illama koduthenga baby
Was nice traveling along with the story
Devadhith

 

[S. Sivagnanalakshmi]

வாழ்த்துக்கள் சகி. வாழ்க வளமுடன்.ஆதி காதலை உணரும் முன்பே பவி உணர்வது சூப்பர். தேவா ஆதி காதல் செம. ஏன் பிரிய நினைக்கிறாள்.

 

[Priya albatross]

வாழ்த்துக்கள் சகி. வாழ்க வளமுடன்.ஆதி காதலை உணரும் முன்பே பவி உணர்வது சூப்பர். தேவா ஆதி காதல் செம. ஏன் பிரிய நினைக்கிறாள்.

கதை முடிந்தது சகி. கதையின் போக்கில் உங்கள் கேள்விக்கான பதில் கிடைக்கும். படித்துவிட்டு கருத்துக்களை பகிர்ந்து கொள்ளுங்கள். நன்றி சகி.

 

[S. Sivagnanalakshmi]

ஆதி தேவா காதல் மோதல் செம.நட்பு அண்ணா தங்கை உறவு . கதை அருமை. வாழ்த்துக்கள் சகி வாழ்க வளமுடன்.

 

[Priya albatross]

ஆதி தேவா காதல் மோதல் செம.நட்பு அண்ணா தங்கை உறவு . கதை அருமை. வாழ்த்துக்கள் சகி வாழ்க வளமுடன்.

மிக்க நன்றி சகி

 

[Chitra ganesan]

காதலில் ஈகோ நடுவில் வருவதால் மாறி மாறி பேசி இறுதியில் சுபம்

போட்டியில் வெற்றி பெற வாழ்த்துகள்

 

[Priya albatross]

காதலில் ஈகோ நடுவில் வருவதால் மாறி மாறி பேசி இறுதியில் சுபம்

போட்டியில் வெற்றி பெற வாழ்த்துகள்

Thanks sis

 

[Lufa Novels]

Nice story ungaloda story thaa na first padicha story…

Five star friendship loved it… pavi & deva yaru payyan yaru ponnu nalla kulapi vitutinga startingla….

Athi and deva love super rendu perum atha correct timing la propose panni solliruntha ivlo kastamum vanthurukkathu…

Deva pidivatham sila time kadupa vanthathu… aathi avana engayum ennala vittu kudukka mudiyala…

Pavi pavam rendu peru naduvula matti chatni aitaan…

Deva appa mela kaduppa irunthaalum avar oru nalla appava irunthurukkar…

Athithi lastla vanthalum super ah score pannita

Aathi and deva cute and sweet pair…,

வெற்றி பெற வாழ்த்துக்கள்

 

[Priya albatross]

Nice story ungaloda story thaa na first padicha story…

Five star friendship loved it… pavi & deva yaru payyan yaru ponnu nalla kulapi vitutinga startingla….

Athi and deva love super rendu perum atha correct timing la propose panni solliruntha ivlo kastamum vanthurukkathu…

Deva pidivatham sila time kadupa vanthathu… aathi avana engayum ennala vittu kudukka mudiyala…

Pavi pavam rendu peru naduvula matti chatni aitaan…

Deva appa mela kaduppa irunthaalum avar oru nalla appava irunthurukkar…

Athithi lastla vanthalum super ah score pannita

Aathi and deva cute and sweet pair…,

வெற்றி பெற வாழ்த்துக்கள்

Thanks sis... Wish you the same

 

[Mathushi]

 

[Mathushi]

 

[Priya albatross]

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Nice sis

 

[priya pandees]

Nice... Nalla concept, நல்ல ௭ழுத்து நடை. Interesting ah kondu poirkenga. Kadaisi vara salipu thatama irunthuchu.. Good feel story.

Ore oru suggestion tan as a reader ah solren. பின்ன போய் பின்ன போய் முன்ன வந்தமாறி ஒரு feel story full ah iruntatu. Flow ah vae itha solirklamae nu thonichu. Jst ithu enoda thought.

Thanku and all the best for your story to get win

 

[Priya albatross]

Nice... Nalla concept, நல்ல ௭ழுத்து நடை. Interesting ah kondu poirkenga. Kadaisi vara salipu thatama irunthuchu.. Good feel story.

Ore oru suggestion tan as a reader ah solren. பின்ன போய் பின்ன போய் முன்ன வந்தமாறி ஒரு feel story full ah iruntatu. Flow ah vae itha solirklamae nu thonichu. Jst ithu enoda thought.

Thanku and all the best for your story to get win

Thanks sis